I'm the department's Writing and Learning Mentor this year. As such, I'm available to meet for one-to-one sessions to discuss pretty much any aspect of your philosophy writing - from how to plan a philosophy essay or dissertation, to how to improve your writing style.
If you have any problems, or would just like to talk about your writing, please get in touch with me to arrange a meeting. You can drop in and see me (with or with out a booking) in Mike Otsuka's office in the philosophy department on Fridays from 12 -1. Alternatively, you can email me to arrange another time.